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 Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]

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PostSubject: Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]   Mon Nov 28, 2011 1:26 pm

Weapon Name:Pockets
Type of Weapon: Supplementary, Tattoo
Rank:B
How Many:2 one on each wrist
Appearance:
Special Ability: This tattoos are actually seals that work like sealing weapons on a scroll that allows the user to seal ninja tools like swords or kunai.The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. Each seal can store a max of 50 items.

Left Hand Seal:39/50
-Kunais x15
-Shurikens x20
- metal thread 10 meters x1
-Pack of cig. x2
-Nekura x1
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Right Hand Seal:39/50
-Nekura x1
-Kunais x15
-Shurikens x20
- metal thread 10 meters x1
-Spare clothes x2
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Weapon Name:Nekura
Type of Weapon:Sword
Rank:B
How Many:2
Appearance:
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Special Ability: Nekura takes C-rank amount of chakra from the user to create a slice of dark chakra that speed and damage depend on the users rank. i.o.w. D-S rank. The blade can take an A-rank attack without cracking.


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PostSubject: Re: Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]   Sun Dec 11, 2011 10:37 pm

After reviewing your application, it has been denied, for several reason(s).
• These two weapons need more of a description, it's to plain and simple to those who decide to view it.
• Kenta, doesn't have the right abilities deserving it's place as a S Rank Weapon.
• What does it mean by "Summon Seal" that allows Itachi to "Summon is by will"?
• Shioshi, what if it can conduct chakra in it? Does it do anything special with it?

Please review your application for those following reason(s).
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PostSubject: Re: Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]   Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]   Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:09 pm

After reviewing your application again, there are just a few little reason(s), that I'd like you to edit.
- Nekura is more fit to be a C Rank-Weapon, that can take B Rank attacks, that will not crack.
- Pockets those are bit too OP. 50 weapons each tattoo? More like those both can store UP to 65 weapons in total.That's more better, although you can be S-Rank Missing-Nin, you are no more higher than a Kage rank, you shouldn't have so much weapons. No shinobi have more than 70 weapons in life.
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PostSubject: Re: Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]   Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:42 pm

im sorry can i get another mod...?
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PostSubject: Re: Itachi's Primary and custom support weapon[Done]   Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:48 pm

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