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 Renmichi Hotaru

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PostSubject: Renmichi Hotaru   Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:49 pm

~The Basics~

First Name: Hotaru
Last Name: Renmichi
Age: 12
Rank: Genin
Village: Sand

~The Blood Work~

Gender: Female
Blood Type: AB
Clan: Takeshi
Kekkei Genkai: Transformation.Specialization

~The Physics~

Hotaru is usually mistaken for older than she really is, due to her being not only tall for her age, measuring up to about 5’8”, but is also very mature due to her past. Her golden brown eyes show an understanding to life no twelve-year-old should have. Her golden locks are usually pulled into a low, long ponytail with her headband tied around her forehead. Her skin is well tanned from living in the desert, and a smile is not a rare site.

As for her attire, she usually wears a black sleeveless half-top with black ninja pants, wrappings coming from the waist up to her belly button. She then wraps bandages around her legs below her pants down to her black shinobi sandals and around her hands and arms.
Height: 5’8”
Weight: 170ibs

~The Traits~

Likes: Kind people, trying her best
Dislikes: Unnecessary violence, rudeness, etc
She is very meek, which is probably why she doesn’t have many friends. Those friends that she does have, though, she is very loyal to. She is very determined and will stop at nothing to complete the task at hand, other than sacrifice her friends or take an innocent life. She loves helping people and a smile is not a rare sight. She will try to help whenever she can.

In battle, her attitude is slightly different. When a battle begins, her smile fades away into an emotionless expression. This allows her to not give away too much of her plans or look too cocky. Her eyes narrow ever so slightly and she becomes more silent than before. She will speak in very short sentences before a battle, but once fighting has commenced, she closes her mouth and doesn’t open again until the battle is over. Even in battle she is humble and tries not to flaunt her intelligence. Her strategy skills are higher than most shinobi her age, giving her the advantage in many situations, but she still refuses to show it.
Hotaru is always kind to people, including her enemies. She believes nothing should be taken for granted and every person deserves respect.

~The Armada~

Primary Weapon: Ryuunomi
Support Weapon: Kunai
Support Weapon: Shuriken
Support Weapon:

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:

  • Main: Kenjutsu
  • Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:

  • Main: Wind
  • Main: N/A
  • Sub: N/A

Special Characteristics: skilled with almost any weapons like most people in her clan

Flaws/Weaknesses: Genjutsu, hesitance


E: 4
C: 1

Name: Shinkūken(Vacuum Sword)
Rank: E
Type: Wind

Chakra: 10
Damage Points: 10

Description: The user swings their blade and a gust of wind is released in the arc that it was swung in. The technique is strong enough to stop projectiles that are thrown at the user.
Name: Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Wind

Chakra: 20
Damage Points: 20

Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. The arrow cannot be blocked but it can be dodged. Since it is made out of wind the arrow is hard to see. One arrow shot at a time.

Name: Fuuton: Fuusajin (Wind Style: Dust Wind)
Rank: D
Type: Wind

Chakra: 15
Damage Points: 15

Description: A gust of wind with added sand from the environment capable also of throwing away objects towards the opponent. Requires handseals and some time for the user to collect the sand. The user will form the handseals and as the Fuusajin rises, it will collect the dust or sand before it gets directed towards the opponent.
Name: Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Rank: D
Type: Wind

Chakra: 25
Damage Points:20

Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are made of air they cannot be blocked or deflected. The only way to ensure safety is to dodge them.

Name: Fuuton Sensougouheki (Wind Style: Rumbleing wind wall)
Rank: D
Type: Wind

Chakra: 20
Damage Points:25

Description: User creates a wall of spinning wind in front of him that is used to push back weapons thrown towards him. It can also be used against taijutsu close range attacks, but the wall can be pushed back with a stronger wind jutsu or if a smoke bomb or explosive tag touches the
spinning wind they will automatically get activated because of the sharpness of the wind Element:, damaging the user also.
Name: Wind Release: Grand Blast
Rank: C
Type: Wind

Chakra: 20
Damage Points: 25

Description: The user sends out a powerful explosion of wind, which can easily level almost an entire area. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame, making it stronger and more damaging to the target.

~The Story~

Daichi Renmichi(Father)
Haruko Rinmichi
Hotaru was the daughter of an ANBU in the Takeshi clan and a strong-willed ANBU shinobi. They began training her at the age of four, setting high expectations for a young kunoichi not even in the academy. At age six, she started the academy and was very meek. You would think that with the skills she possessed, she would be popular among her peers, but they seemed to completely ignore her. It might’ve been because of her meek attitude.

One day when she got home from the academy, she walked in to her father and mother fighting, and not like some quarrel between a married couple, but full out combat. Jutsu were flying left and right as were punches, but in the end, her father became victorious. Her mother’s body went limp and fell in a bloody puddle to the ground. Hotaru began to cry. What could’ve made him do something like this? Then her father came toward her and began to attack her, his own daughter! His words were inaudible to the young girl as she took punch after punch. As she was fading out of the world, she caught a glimpse of an ANBU mask. After getting this small look at her savior, her mind blacked out. The next thing she knew, she was in the hospital, covered in bandages. She didn’t remember much of what happened, but she did remember it was her father who did it, so has held a great resentment for her father ever since.

After a while, she went back to the academy and ended up graduating at the age of ten. At her graduation, as a gift and to honor her mother’s death, Hotaru was given her mother’s sword. Although, she didn’t quite know what to do with it considering she had never actually learned of her clan ability at the time.

A month after graduation, a member of her clan came and offered her training, and she was an exceptionally fast learner and ended up learning both the first and second release of her clan’s main ability, weapon transformation. It still took her three months to learn these, though. She can only hold the second release for about ten minutes, but this is still better than most clan members her age. She was also able to learn Weapon Specialization with her Kusari-gama release in spite of her teacher trying to talk her out of it. Most clan members never specialized in a lower level release.

Nowadays, she spends most of her time alone, either training, reading, or drawing.
Extra Information: N/A

~The Finals~

Alias: lilCoz
Best Way to Contact: PM
RP Sample:
Ami heard her sister’s voice scream out. It was her father again, she knew it. This was the final time she was going to sit around and do nothing but help her little sister for that one time. No, she was going to get her father and make him wish he had never done any of this.

She went up to her father, grabbed her sister from him, and placed her far away from what was fixing to be a battle ground. “Hayato Kohaku, the person whom I have called Father for years, you do not deserve the title of father. No true father would nearly kill a small child because their wife died. You are no father.”

Her fingers flew through her hand signs: rat, tiger, dog, ox, rabbit, tiger. “Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique!” Small fireballs spat from her mouth toward her father. He managed to dodge most of them, but was hit in the right shoulder with a flaming shuriken.

Her father screamed in rage and ran toward his oldest daughter with a kunai. “I will not allow my only daughter to treat me this way.” He screamed. Misaki’s eyes filled with tears and she ran in trying to stop her father. Hayato turned to his younger daughter and aimed for her heart. Misaki looked at the kunai, utter terror paralyzing her limbs. She couldn’t move. She couldn’t dodge. This was it. Then, suddenly, Ami jumped in front of her sister and the kunai struck her neck, barely missing the vital artery.

Misaki cried over her sister. “Don’t die Ami. Please, don’t die.”

Ami looked her little sister in the eyes. “Don’t worry about me. I just want you to be safe.”

Misaki ran out of the house crying until she was stopped by the hospital. “Whoa Misaki. What’s going on?” The medical ninja asked.

“A-Ami!” Misaki cried out.

“Where?” The medical ninja followed Misaki back to her house.

“Is sissy going to be okay?” Tears streamed down Misaki’s now pale face.

“I think so. I think we got to her just in time.” The ninja’s hands glowed with chakra. “We will have to take her to the hospital though…

*a few days later*

Ami’s eyes opened slowly to see her father’s dark face. He was surrounded by high level shinobi that seemed to have his arms bound. “What do you want?” Ami glared the light gone from her usually bright green eyes.

“Oh Ami, betrayed by my only daughter…”

Ami cut him off. “You have another daughter that you tried to kill.”

“Oh yes, I did try to kill her, but not only a few days ago. I tried to kill her in the womb, but my whole plan backfired and my beloved died instead.”

“You MONSTER!” Ami yelled, “To think I used to have respect for you!” She struggled to get up and hit him but couldn’t. Hayato simply laughed as the ninja dragged him away. Ami kept glaring at him coldly until he left her room. Soon after their “father” left, Misaki waltzed in with a giant smile on her face. “Onee-chan! You’re awake and alive!” She ran over and grasped her sister’s waist. “I knew you’d be okay. I just knew it.” Ami smiled at her little sister, so innocent, clueless of her father’s actions, but that was as it should be.
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PostSubject: Re: Renmichi Hotaru   Thu Nov 24, 2011 10:48 pm

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

  • You must fill out the Skill Information section of the bio.
  • You must add the 3 Academy Jutsu that you automatically receive to the jutsu count. (Basically change the E-Rank from 1 to 4)

Once you have fixed these things I can approve your application.
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PostSubject: Re: Renmichi Hotaru   Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:34 pm

I edited it. Sorry Teo, I must've been partially out of it to skip over that...
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PostSubject: Re: Renmichi Hotaru   Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:38 pm

After reviewing your application, your character has been approved! You may now start your Role-Playing adventures! Please first stop by the Bingo Book and add in your Character Sheet.
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